"FANTASTIC FIRST LINE."
*smacks forehead*
Yep, I'm taking a big, ol' breath and starting a new story. I took a short break, but now I'm standing here feeling thissmall looking up at this unknown, 60,ooo-word mountain. I've either gotta start climbing, find another mountain, or go home.
*gulp*
2 comments:
Your first line shows promise -- it's fantastic! -- but I think it could use a little editing. ;)
Thank you for the fantastic advice!
Hee.
:-P
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